Treatment Feed back.

The main thing that went well and that our audience liked was our use of conventions, and the way we challenged them. the main way we challenged the conventions was the way we changed the steroe typical gangster role from male to female. Also the conventional opening to a gangster film is of a murder taking place, or some sort of huge event happening and it being reflected on. ours is challenging that because we are showing the end as the beginning and the main structure of our film relies on it lopping round and showing the start again.  obviously we are not doing the hole film but as we went into detail about our beginning people began to understand our theory and began to agree that it would be a good idea.